Hemlock 7 / ( 12 )
So much dialogue was banned from this page. I had to write complicated transitions to have Jaunes lines and Barberas lines seem somewhat from the same discussion and prompting each other. But then i simply faced it: They have vastly different goals right now. Jaune wants samll talk, attention and praise and gets annoye that she s only hearing warnings or being ignored. Barbera is focussed on her attack. I was writing in full glee mode around barbera but really had to get the story moving as well, too. The relationship between these charakter is important, but so is driving the plot. And the plot for Jaune is, what gabriel says in the first panel. And for Gabriel and Barbera... surviving. with each other. with their antagonists.