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I had a very good comic artist friend look over this and the last two pages. I am pretty unhappy how Gabriel and Barbera keep standing around and it makes for boring panels. Well. They discuss and 4 people talk over each other. So the solution is ok - but i am not happy. But this is an ongoing quest... Crazy angles should only be used if i need to invoke feelings of vertigo or agoraphobia or claustrophobia. And here... well, Jaune has outbursts - i could have exaggerated this better maybe to make for more enticing visuals.
This way, Gabriel and Barbera frame the picture so inconveniently, that the background doesnt work anymore. Well - i am considering mixing it up with the backgrounds and going with lighter linecolors in the future. But I d only color lines in digitally - not starting with grey inks, since i have to up the contrast on the scans a lot anyway and it distorts the marker work. I have one tiny panel i did with markers in this chapter and it turned out horrible after the scan, since for twisted i go very, very harsh on the levels.