Vipers and Pitbulls 2 / ( 5 )
So, i worried a lot about drawing a scene between people we ll only be seeing for a very brief time. they are just Ls testing ground. I shortened this chapter drastically.
This page originally consisted of 3 pages - there was a whole interaction with the Senator calling the police chief, showing how chummy they are and that they ll get onto arresting the lady. then realizing what they realize on this page. They dont know, who she is. When i took the big scissors to the chapters i felt were not good enough, this was one of my main concerns: Eliminating as many characters from the script as possible, if theyre not vital for showing off story or character bits. so - if the fbi is corrupt you can guarantee that the police is, too.